TFA: CF chpt1 pg10

TFA fan comic book CONDITIONAL FREEDOM series.
Chapter 1 Of Misfits and Miscreants.

I initially had another layout that was becoming tiring and boring for the comics, so suggested something else, which gave her the oportunity to sketch this one out. kudos to her for that.
I then tweaked a few sketches, mostly the main sketch because I wanted it a bit more dynamic for the dramatic feeling.
then the linning...hmmm I did the background which was a pain, main panel character lines and colour bases, and prometheus's line and colour base.
hence why this came out sooner than expected

Prometheus prime, Ignus, Skyblade and rusty are my creations there for I own them.
Transformer belongs to hasbro/takara.

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PLEASE critic, comment, whatever, I like to read them and besides it helps improve the comic, wether its quality or a confusing layout please do say :3